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Cute. The Blazblue chibi sprites are always so adorable.
I'm debating if I want to post some character design notes (such as how Haruka's outfit is actually worn, she's got three layers to that outfit!) and some character revisions. I also want see other people's ideas as well. I hope more will post. :)
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lol. That poster always cracks me up. Reminds me of the wanted posters of Lina and Goury in Slayers.
KnightmareZ
Member
Hayate "Shadow" Kurosagi’s story(If he was in the Blazblue world^^)
Before:
Since he was born in Shokubaru Village(Race Wolf/Human),the Kurosagi clan are highly agile,cunning and skilled warriors that they seal another type of black beast,it was known as Shingyoku(Red-eyed black beast that has the shape of a wolf)his family sacrifice their lives to seal the Shingyoku,his mother seal it on her son's back,because her son was dying she sacrifice her life to save him,after that,now he was born with a cursed seal on his back and he was named Hayate Kurosagi.At the age of 5,everyone in the Shokubaru Village was feared because all they see him as a monster,he has the cursed seal of the Shingyoku on his back,every children,grownups don't wanna make friends with him because he's a monster and always makes fun of him,but he does not harm them,even though he was called as a monster.But,except for his grandfather(the highest ranked warrior of Kurosagi family),he seen darkness within him but he sees that he has a good heart,then he trained him to become agiled,cunning and skilled warrior.10 years after,at the age of 15,after he trained him,he must control the Shingyoku in him,then he did it,his grandfather was impressed because his powers are evenly unmatched,but...something happened...after he controlled it,the Shingyoku was too powerful to be control,then it became unstable,he can't control it,his grandfather tried to stop him...but it was too late...he transformed himself as the monstrous Shingyoku,then the village was turned to chaos everyone screamed but they tried to run,but they've been killed by it,his grandfather had mistake then he face the Shingyoku(Hayate,his grandson)and said "I've should've known that this would happen,it's all my fault that I told you to control the Shingyoku by yourself,but...I was wrong,I didn't know that this is not the right time to control the beast within you...Hayate...just because everyone sees you a calls you as a monster...I don't care if you're a monster or not...I love you,Hayate...your still my grandson...and now I have to finish of what I've did to you",he stops the Shingyoku with his Renkaku(twin blades),after that he sacrifice his life to Hayate.After Hayate transforms back to himself,then he see the village was destroyed and everyone's been killed by him,but he sees his grandfather lying on the ground badly wounded,then rush onto him,then his grandfather has still last breath to say him "Hayate...do you remember how your mother save you,...when you were dying since you're still young that day...*coughs*she sacrifice her life to save you,because she loves you as much as I do love you...Hayate*coughs*don't forget the things that I trained you to survive...*coughs*I don't know how much breath I can take....by the way...take this Renkaku,this blade has been kept of the Kurosagi family for years...*coughs*since you're the last of the Kurosagi clan...*coughs*I think you can wield its power......keep it,(eyes begins to close)use it to save everyone....*coughs*farewell
..........my grandson..........*passed away*",Hayate's has his last words to his grandfather "I will....
grandfather....".At the age of 18,after he left his own race,now he's on his own,and now wears black colored outfit and wears black mask,and the became one of the strongest elite group of assassins,and hunts his target with the higher price,and everyone was feared from him,but all they see is a blink of shadow,and forever now he is called the masked assassin "Shadow".
Now:
2 years after,at the age of 20,Hayate Kurosagi becomes one of the subtitute student of NOL,because he was paid with a higher price to kill Terumi"Hazama"Yuuki,but before he do that,he must face the obstacles.He is the classmate of Jin,Noel,Carl,Tsubaki and Makoto,but everyone see him as mysterious guy who ignores everyone around him,but he's different in NOL,he doesn't talk much,he never talks to them,and always ignores them,he always stays at rooftop looking at the skies.Day 2 at the hallway,Jin introduces himself to Hayate,but Hayate just walks away(it's like he's ignoring Jin),then Jin challenge him to a duel match to test his skills,then he accepted Jin's challenge,later he was defeated by Hayate,Jin can't realized how fast Hayate's moves and reflexes are and he feel ashamed of himself,defeated by a subtitute,and Hayate told him to stand up and said "You're maybe just a major ranked,but you still fight well...*walks away*oh,and by the way,...don't ever get the wrong idea,to face me again...farewell...Major Kisaragi...*disappears*".Day 3,at the hallway,Carl want's to battle Hayate to proof what his abilities are,then he found out,he's faster than the others(not 1 second,yet less than 1 second in the blink of an eye),then Hayate points the Knife at Carl's neck and said "You're just lucky...*walks away*you're too young to be killed",shows he still have mercy for them.Day 10,at the rooftop,Makoto saw Hayate and then ask him "Hayate,what are you doing up here?",then he answered "Nothing...just nothing,Lady Nanaya...",then Makoto replied "Is there something bothering you,Hayate?"then he answered "Now,that you mention it,Lady Nanaya...yes...",then Makoto replied "So...what is it",then he answered "Why do you ask,Lady Nanaya?..."and Makoto replied"I'm just curious,that's all:3",then he answered"I can't tell you,Lady Nanaya...if you wanna hear it,you have to hear it clearly of what I say",then Makoto replied "Don't worry,I won't tell anyone",then he answered "I...killed...and destroyed,my own race",then Makoto "WHAT!?WHY DID YOU!?..."then he answered "I DON'T KNOW!!...*walks away*I don't know,Lady Nanaya...",still feels the pain in his past.Day 16,at the canteen,he ask Tager something about Terumi Yuuki or Hazama,to get information from him.Day 19,at Terumi's room,he was called by Terumi Yuuki,then he closed the door,then,quicksly rush at Terumi's back and points the knife at him and said "Are there any last words before I dispatch you?...",and Terumi answered "Yes,there is...how'bout I paid you 1,000,000,000pd?...what do you say?",and he replied "Keep talkin...*let goes Terumi*",and Terumi answered "*Shows the wanted poster at him*Here's the one I want you to kill,his name is Ragna the BloodEdge,one of the strongest enemies of the NOL for years,he has the power of the black beast,I know you're one of the strongest elite group of assassins...isn't that right masked assassin?or should I call you,Shadow?...",and he replied "Where can I find him?...",after that,now he's in the search of Ragna the BloodEdge,while Makoto is looking at the window,then she see someone jumping from roof to roof wearing black set of outfit,didn't see it's face,but she heard about the masked assassin "Shadow".Day 20,jumping from roof to roof in the search of Ragna the BloodEdge,then a ninja appeared in his front named Bang,then Bang said "Well,well got ourselves an doggy-assassin here,what's your name,Punk!!",then he replied "(Grr..I've got no time for this...)Do you call yourself a ninja,how pathetic,you're the lowest type of ninja's I've ever saw...",later red ninja ask "Boss!!you alright?,and blue said "Whoa,he really nailed you boss",and Bang answered "Grrr...SHUDDAP!!D:<",after that Bang was defeated,then again he jumps from roof to roof.Day 25,in a chinese restaurant,while taking a little break,after he finish his break,he didn't know he was stepping on some black ooze with white mask named Arakune,Arakune was pissed off then he fight him,then after that Arakune was defeated,then a doctor came and said "OMG!are you alright!?"and Shadow replied "No,no I'm fine...",and the doctor answered "I wasn't talking to you!I was talking to him!Oh...Ara-kun are you okay?"and Shadow felt weird to them and said "Oh...kay...*Walks away and again jumps from roof to roof in the search of Ragna the BloodEdge*.Day 28,stranded in the Kaka village,and Shadow"(Oh great...how the hell did I get here?...)~_~"*surrounded by the little kakas"and the little kaka said "Wow,look at his fwuffy ears",and another little kaka said "Look at his fwuffy tail,CHOMP!!*bites Shadows tail",and Shadow "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!!!!!!!!DX"
.Day 31,after he escaped that horrifying village,"(Wew!now I got out from that horrible place*checks out his pocket*WHATTHE!?(those little bastards stole my money)*walking*stomach grumbles*,(-your mother is a classy lady-...no money...no food...now I'm starving...*sniffs*sniffs*buns?...)",sees another kaka eating buns "OMNOMNOMNOMNOMX3",and Shadow "(Oh,-your mother is a classy lady-...not another one...)*stomach grumbles*...ugh...",and Taokaka hears something behind the bushes "Huh?who's there*she looks over the bushes",and Shadow "(Nows my chance!)*quicksly rush and eats the buns*",and Taokaka saw him and said "HEY!!D:<",and Shadow "(-your mother is a classy lady-....)*makes a run for it*",and Taokaka chases him "COMEBACK HERE!!!!YOU FOODSTEALER!!!!!D:<",and Shadow stops and kneels in front of her and said "I'm sorry I ate your buns!!I was so hungry!!Because one your clan stole my money!!",and Taokaka said "Oh,is that so?...well,you have to pay Tao first!!or...in other hand...",later...,and Shadow "(What in the world have I gone been thru....T_T)*tied to a leash*"and Taokaka "C'mon,Fluffy:3,lets go find Goodguy:3",and Shadow "(Good-what-guy!?)".Day 32,Goodguy ask "Where the hell have you been,Tao!?",and Taokaka "Well...I found this cute doggy:3",and Goodguy replied "Uh...Tao,thats not just dog...~_~"",and Taokaka replied"Huh?",Goodguy said "It's a half-man and half-dog",and Shadow answered "HEY!!IMAH HALF-WOLF!YOU SON OF A-!O_O*Looks at his face*",Goodguy replied "So you're a half-wolf...okay Tao let him go"and Taokaka "WHAT!?B-but...",Goodguy replied "Let him go...",and Taokaka "Awwww...alright...>:(",Goodguy answered "Okay,you can go now...I said you can go now...",and Shadow ask "Tell me...",Goodguy replied "What?", and Shadow replied "Tell me...are you Ragna?...",Ragna answered "Yeah,why?...",and Shadow "So you're Ragna.....the black beast....",and Ragna "Huh?",and Shadow said "Ragna....the BloodEdge....*quicksly slashes him",and Ragna "WHATTHE!?*dodge the attack*D:<",and Taokaka "EEEEEEEK!!GOODGUY!!ARE YOU ALRIGHT!?,Ragna answered "Okay,Tao,stay out of this!",and Shadow said "Time for you...to go....*attacks Ragna*",and Jin appeared in the battle and said "Stop!!*blocks Shadow*if you gonna fight him,you have to go thru me"and Ragna said "Jin!what the hell are you doing here!?",Jin answered "I just can't let you killed by him,I'm the only one who supposed to kill you,brother",and Ragna said "Right...~_~",and Jin spoke to to the masked assassin "Are you the one who attacks my brother",and Shadow answered "...",Jin notice something about him and said "Hey,have we met before?...",and Shadow answered "I don't know what you're talking about",Jin looks at him and said "Hmm...you know you remind of someone I know in the academy,he had that ears and that fluffy tail...and hmm...",and Shadow said "Grrr,MY TAIL!!IS NOT FLUFFY!!!D:<",and Jin said "Well,sorry^_^"",and Ragna ask "Are you two gonna fight?or you two just arguing?...",Jin and Shadow answered "OFCOURSE WE"RE GONNA FIGHT!!!D:<,and Ragna said "Oh...kay...~_~"",later,after Shadow defeated Jin,Jin notice about Shadow and said "Those moves...those reflexes...tell me Shadow...are you Hayate Kurosagi?...answer me...",and Shadow answered "I can't answer that...",Jin replied "Grrr...ANSWER ME!!!",and now Shadows gonna fight Ragna,and Ragna said"So you want to battle me?Then fine with ME!!*brings out his sword*,after Ragna weakened Shadow,someone's hiding in the bushes,and Ragna said "How dare you to face someone is stronger than you are",and Shadow said "Grrr...you're wrong*his body begining to change*,GRAAAAH!!!I was just getting started!!*transforms himself into Shingyoku* "GRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!",and Ragna was suprised froms his transformation "What the hell?...".After Ragna defeated the Shingyoku,it transforms back into himself,but after Ragna tried to kill him,someone stop him and grabs Shadow to get him away from Ragna.After that,Shadow was defeated by Ragna,"Did...I...die?.....",and a voice speaks to him "Hayate...I am ashamed of you...",and Shadow replied "That voice...is that you grandfather?...",and he answered "Yes...",and Shadow ask "Why...are you here?....",and he answered "Hayate,...why did you inteded to kill someone,that is stronger than you are...",and Shadow said "Is that so....I've never knew I wasn't strong enough....I did everything I could to defeat him...",and he answered "Hayate...I know what you did to the money they gave you to kill...but you're giving the money to the poor",and Shadow ask "What do you mean,grandfather?...",and he answered "I mean,I am proud you my grandson...please don't forget the one who save you...........",and Shadow reaches the light "Grandfather.....",and another voice speaks to him "Hayate!,wake up!,wake up!",and Hayate ask "Did I die again?...",and Makoto said "*bonks Hayate's head*Die again!?Are you crazy!?",and Dr.Litchi said "Hey!!Don't do that on the patients!!",and Makoto answered "Hihi,sorry^w^"",and Hayate ask "Why am I here?Lady Nanaya?what are doing here?",and Makoto answered "Well...I follow you everywhere you go,when I saw you lying on the ground,that guy tried to kill you,then I rush to him and saved you,when I carry you around,you were badly injured,so I take you to the doctor I know,and thats why you're still here:3..."and Hayate ask "Why did you saved me,Lady Nanaya?..."and Makoto answered "Well...ummm...I...just can't let you die out there...when you told me you destroyed you're own clan I understand how you feel to live your life as monster and can't control your monstrous self of how you destroyed your own race...",and Shadow replied "So you saw me back there?...",and Makoto ask "Hayate...are you really "Shadow" the masked assassin?...",and Hayate answered "...Yes....",and Makoto ask "Did they pay you to kill?...",and Hayate answered "Yes...",and Makoto asked "So...what did you do the money they gave you?...",and Hayate answered "I give the money to the poor...",and Makoto said "Oh...that's so nice of you HayateX3...",and Hayate said ""Lady Nanaya...thank you...I owe you my life...I am in your death...",and Makoto replied "Oh,Hayate-kun,please call me Makoto:3",and Hayate answered "As you wish...Makoto...".
After:
2 days after Makoto left the NOL(After what happened to Hazama)and leaves with Noel and Tager,Hayate followed her,then Makoto asked Hayate "Hayate-kun,why are you following me?you're leaving NOL too?:3,then he answered "Yes...there's something I haven't paid you yet,Makoto,you saved my life,I will follow you wherever you go,I swear to protect you at all cause...if you need me...I'll be in the shadows...(like a silent assassin who always hide in the shadows)",then she replied "Oh-kay...looks like I have my own bodyguard to protect meX3",now that they left NOL,Hayate will follow her everywhere she goes,and protects her from danger.
END...
By:NightmareZenuki
Author's comment:
The thing about Hayate's determined and mysterious personality was a bit like Robin Hood(from Robin Hood),and Snake Eyes(from GI-JOE),Uchiha Sasuke(from Naruto)and Raven(from Tekken),the person paid him to kill his target,and gave the money to the poor is almost a bit like Robin Hood,his moves and reflexes are almost same as Snake Eyes and Raven,and the way he doesn't talk much is a bit like Snake Eyes and Byakuya Kuchiki(from Bleach),and the thing of why he can't control the Shingyoku yet and past story is a bit like Uzumaki Naruto(from Naruto),but has a loyal personality sometimes.Oh and by the way,you've notice something that I've actually skip the thing that they're going to battle is actually my example of the cutscene.Hope you like the story I've madeXD
KnightmareZ
Member
RedVermillion said:
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lol. That poster always cracks me up. Reminds me of the wanted posters of Lina and Goury in Slayers.
I think I just found Haruka's perfect soundtrack^^
examples
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xy5c5MaK-68
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qqsowywqBF0
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nuPEG7tUFik
Blargus
Member
Hey... is anyone here anymoe? Well... I might as well say what since I'm here. I found this forum a few days ago and thought it would be cool to post what I had on my mind. I've been thinking of writing a fanfiction with my character but I can't get my mind around a solid concept for him. So was looking how to draw like blazblue and found this. I think this as an opportunity to get my character down...not what you wanted to hear eh? Well about the rules. I haven't gotten a drawing of him yet cause I'm not that great an artist yet, so I'll just post some of the info about him.
Name: Lilo Blake
Race: 1/4 Butterfly Beastkin, 3/4 Human
Birthplace: 28th Hierarchical City Umikumaiwa(made the city up)
Birthday: January 3rd
Weight: 172 lbs
Height: 6'1"
Bloodtype: A
Gender: Male
Drive Name: Siphon {It's like Ragna's but instead of siphoning life he damages & takes from the barrier guage}
Hobbies/Likes: Reading, Showering, Electronics, Power.
Dislikes: Stubbornness, Ignorance, Pokes, Loud Noise.
Story(if-fy): His father was a half butterfly beastin and his mother human. He was born in the small 28th Hierarchical City Umikumaiwa. When he was three the town he was in was set on fire and he had his chest burned horribly when Relius appeared and took him in. Unbekownst to him Relius had healed his chest by putting in the Ivory Grimore. Several years later he is sent to the NOL acadamy. Being part beastkin he easily passed the physical exam and was surpised that his armagus exam broke the record. A few years later Jin attended the acadamy and they became good friends. About two years later Jin became student body president. Later Hazama told Lilo that he has been nominated for a special position as Liutenant Colonel of the 45th division and he had a week to decide yes or no. Going through the normal feelings of graduation he walks around campus and notices Makoto spying on him. After a brief fight Makoto storms off.
-Thats all I'm putting up for now. Hopefully no one steals my idea.-
Relationships (overall):
Ragna: Unsure about him because they both have a Grimore. Outside of that he doesn't care for Ragna.
Jin: Very good friends. Lilo is the only person at the acadamy that Jin feels he can be completly honest too about most things although he feels that Lilo doesn' feel the same way. Lilo isn't affected when Jin defects however.
Noel: Lilo finds her personality adorable. He also knows about her high scores in armagus testing(it's not a secret, most students don't care) so he knows she's not pathetic. Lilo isn't affected when she defects.
Rachel: (unknown)
Taokaka: Doesn't care for her.
Tager: Lilo is interested in him because he feels that they are alike just working for opposing factors.
Litchi: Boobs.
Arakune: Doesn't care for him.
Bang: The. MOST. Annoying. Person. EVER.
Carl: Is oddly fond of him. Reminds him of Relius.
Hakumen: He isn't sure what to feel about the six hereos but would definatly like to avoid confrontation with Hakumen because of his stubbornness.
Nu-13: One of Relius's finer creations, although not sure about how she acts around Ragna.
Lambda-11: Finds it pathetic that Kokonoe had to steal one of Relius's creations.
Kokonoe: Genius scientist, just he's disapointed in her methods.
Mu-12: (unknown yet)
Tsubaki: One of the greatest members of the NOL. He is oblivious to Hazama's plan so he finds it admirable and disturbing that Tsubaki would carry out her task.
Hazama: Obviously a shady character but has opened so many doors for him at the NOL. Has no idea that Hazama is Terumi until CS.
Relius: Lilo sees him as a second father. Has no idea about Carl being his real son until CS.
Makoto: Sexy NOL officer with some problems.
Platinum: He isn't sure what to feel about the six hereos but would definatly like to avoid confrontation with her.
Valkenhayn: He isn't sure what to feel about the six hereos but would definatly like to avoid confrontation with him. He also finds it weird that he smells like roses.
-Well I'll be back tommorro and maybe tuesday. Hopefully with a response and a drawing of my character.-
Derin Chartle
Member
this is really intresting, and ive been reading it awhile now, and with my intelegence, ive made my character as well (but will not be able to upload pics of him).
Name: Derin Chartle
Race: Human
Birthplace: 13th Hierarchical City, Kagutsuchi
DOB: March 7th
Weight: 223 lb.
Height: 6'1"
Bloodtype: A
Gender: Male
Drive: Raijin
Astral: Flash Driver
Powers: Lightning
Abilities: Quick speed, Lightning Charge, Stun.
Hobbies: Makes experiments, reads books
Likes: Enjoying sunsets
Dislikes: Himself, being useless to others when he wishes to help.
Story: Derin was a scientist working with Sector 7, who studied vast amounts of research on how to make new forms of energy. He one day left his research on his desk, and forgot to take it with him, that same night, Kokonoe saw his research and was wanting to test his research to see if it worked. The next day Derin comes in, he's strapped to a devise he had made himself.Kokonoe told him "Lets test your Knowledge". From the moment he herd those words escape, he tried to release the restraints on him, but it was to late, for when Kokonoe pulled the lever, he was infused with lightning. During the time he was blacked out, Noel Vermillion found him in the deep underground Boundary when she was on duty one day. She takes him to litchi, which is where he recovers, only to wake up to part of his memory being extracted from him during "Project 723546".
Mission: To find out who he is and find his savior, then plan a strike back against Kokonoe for what she did.
Relations:
Ragna: He's herd the rumors and read the signs, yet he seems attracted to the "Grim Reapers" power...
Noel: wishes to thank her in anyway possible and to serve as her personal bodyguard.
Jin: has herd him as "The Hero of Ikaruga" ,but has an ugly feeling that it's not the truth...
Bang Shishigami: Likes his enthusiasm.
Tager: Despises all creations of Kokonoe and wishes to dispose of him.
Arakune: Would like to destroy the cytoplasmic membrane around him so that he can study the specimen.
Rachel: <unknown>
Litchi: Has agreed in order to pay his dept to her, he works with her in the clinic.
Carl: No interest in.
Taokaka: Love's her spirit and playfulness.
Hakumen: Has always respected the six hero's and wan'ts to meet Hakumen.
Hazama: Already know's his true identity and hopes to stop him from BlazBlue.
Tsubaki: Has seen her sometimes, walking around, but is interested in the Artifact she carries.
Makoto: Respects her enthusiasm, fighting skill, and personality, and eventually became good friends with her.
Derin Chartle
Member
here is a soundtrack ( Normal: without the lyrics ( Unlimited: with lyrics)
just keep in mind the changes ^w^ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LztZi_OqAfs
Mudkip132
Member
This is amusing,so I guess I shall join in this awesomeness.My character:
Name:Vince
Race:human
Alias:Sir Vince
Birthplace:13th Hierarchical City, Kagutsuchi
Date of birth:Oct.5th
Weight:218 lb.
Height:6'1"
Blood type:A
Gender:male
Drive:False hope
Astral:Punishment of justice
Powers:stone
Abilities:Generating objects using stone,
Hobbies:Drawing at his free-time,collecting pieces of art
Likes:Justice,being respected
Dislikes:Criminals,the NOL
Stage:Orient Town
Mission of his story:To find out who murdered his family
Bad ending:After giving up on finding who murdered his family,he encounters Relius,and gets killed by him
True ending:He found out his family were murdered by Hazama,after defeating Hazama,Vince goes back to Orient Town
Gag reel:(none)
Name of his story:
Relations:
Ragna:Has a deep hatred for him
Jin:Dislikes him
Noel:Will do whatever to protect her,despite the fact she's in the NOL
Rachel:Dislikes her
Taokaka:When depressed,he will visit Tao to lift his spirits up
Tager:He has befriend Tager
Bang:Respects the way Bang is in to Justice
Arakune:Will protect Arakune at all costs
Litchi:Has befriend Litchi to help save Arakune
Carl:Has small respect for him
Hakumen:Has a small hatred for Hakumen
Hazama:Deeply hates Hazama
Relius:He is terrified of Relius
Makoto:Deep hatred for her
Platinum:Vince has a hatred for Luna,but respect for Sena
Tsubaki:Respect for her
Lambda:He has befriended Lambda,just like Tager
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